А в Стишках есть мартышка Максимка.
Ох, прыжки-ж у него, да ужимки!
Сдуру пишет стишки,
Лучше-б ел пирожки...
Безразличный мне дурень Максимка.
ГранКаналия Хуевертура
GCF• 23.04.08 00:23
OK. "разумное/доброе/вечное чмо" better? Try this http://opankey.com/proza/20060310
Hasta manana.
GCF• 22.04.08 23:23
Only to reinforce my previous opinion... I read "Sea Sickness", and I do not see any similarities with your writing. Sorry for saying that (it is, obviously, my opinion) but your poems are dirty. I don't think rape issue should be exploited, but if it is, the form you selected is unpleasant to read. And then again, the choice of venue... Why Anekdot.ru?
GCF• 22.04.08 23:14
Well, maybe you've learned it from the great Russian writers, such as Kuprin et. al.
R S• 22.04.08 23:09
I don't know, really. I guess I have some innate philological streak in me. Can't be helped...
GCF• 22.04.08 23:02
That was not the question. The operative words were "SO WELL". Look at the rest of people (e.g. me) for whom Russian is the native language as well.
R S• 22.04.08 22:58
No hyphen with "бы" (except in Максимка-БЫдло) or "же" (except in умница-ЖЕртва).
R S• 22.04.08 22:13
Down with hyphens! Remember the "Бы!" success. Sorry for being pedantic, though.